Who can see your viewing activity?
What was most interesting?
Where did you it lag, or get confusing?
How would you make it better?
went good for us!
It went good I love hearing everyones projects!
it was fun to string the story together
It went really well for us
Good for us
Story went well, it was difficult to explain quickly
Grace Ann Pointe
The moral of the story is a pondering thought.
I think it was hard to summarize how we first started the story.
went back on a bridge and brought another across
I couldn't find any issues with my partner's story
I'm honestly so proud of everyone I've talked to today!
Fun to hear other’s ideas
Went pretty well overall
Everyone had super interesting ideas and it helped to talk through it with others!
Internet was bad
went very well! loved listening to her story
Loved the feedback!
It went well! it was nice to hear another story.
coming up with the story was hard, but talking with another person and telling them a story that I knew was easy
A good exercise in distilling an experience down to just a couple of words.
It is hard to quickly explain the background of a story
Great, other stories were great to hear and learn what others said.
I did my product that I created in 201. My roadblock is that my story feels unfinished since my product was never physically created
I loved listening to the individual's idea and see how he felt about that idea as he told the story. I also liked getting to know the person a little before presenting my idea.
I thought it was cool to see what others were doing and how differently/similar our projects were
I liked having a conversation about different ideas with feedback
I love being able to hear from other people what their ideas are. It really allows you to see passions and goals.
Interesting to hear what my partners had to story tell about
Stories went well! I struggled when it came to giving feedback after hearing a story.
It was cool to hear how the other person started to relate to my story
the art of getting the story board filled is good practice
I struggle with telling a SUCCINCT story.
@ann, yes, definitely! It takes practice. Every time you tell the story, you’ll get a better sense of what’s most important, and what you can drop.
@Will, that makes sense. Some ppl sort it out better by writing, others by telling the story out loud. And there’s power in going back and forth between the two.
3 elements: Details, Drama, Meaning
There was suspense waiting for the response of her mother
Suspense- How would the mother respond to her question?
Meaningful reflection at the end
a lot of details
Used details when describing how people got her name wrong
Power in the meaning reflection
details, meaning, suspense
Drama when she asked her mom to call her zoey
Drama imitating her mom
Grace Ann Pointe
Mystery on her name meaning.
The fine details of how her mother reacted
She used the sensory element discussing the mother cookong
Details and meaning
meaning reflection at the end when she said that everything we have was given to us at birth and it is ours
Reflection at the end, details
She gave a lot of details about her
what did Michelangelo think of his name?
Details in Mystery on her name meaning
Using historical figures to teach a lesson
I felt like I was in her shoes. Lots of detail.
The moral is to fully accept every detail of yourself and your heritage.
@beau, yes, I felt like I was right in the room watching her talk to her mom.
2 min each. Then discuss how it changed the story.
2 min left
hey you said my name right
I'll do it
Great Work Monica!
nice flow to the story
Monica, you rocked it!
That was a great story! Super compelling!
The enthusiasm you conveyed through your story is contagious. Great work!
I've known Monica since elementary school and it made me happy to hear her story!
That’s, awesome, Cole :-)
Grace Ann Pointe
Can you show the last slide with the three things to include?
@grace - we’ll share the deck with you later
But they are...
1. Full screen images
2. Minimal text
3. Use your own photos
The pictures of her family enhanced her presentation
her ability to add some humor within a sensitive topic to create that pull and still maintain emotion was admirable
The background and detail she shared with mental illness within her life
I thought it was more powerful that her presentation didn't work out how she'd hoped. It kind or reflects how life doesn't always go how we plan
She had such a good attitude about not having a final project, but highlighted what she learned instead
Her resilience is inspiring- her ability to deliver such a powerful presentation when she didn’t have all her tools was awesome
I like that she shared what Google showed what depression looked like but then showed a picture of her brother and what his depression looked like.
How she showed what you think a depressed person would look like vs. what depressed people actually look like; smilling holding the dog. That resonated with me because it is important to create people with respect, not knowing what people have actually going on inside.
@beau absolutely! Good insight.
There are seven slides to be made, correct?
How much do we again?
I like… I wish… I wonder...
I wish there were more than 24 hours in a day! Time is my biggest challenge...
I like the enthusiasm of the LEAPERS!
@ann That is very relatable!
I like how engaged I was and how entertaining it was, I wish I would have started taking notes earlier, I wonder how I can apply these skills to my life in other ways besides my leap.
I like that I can apply this in other writings I'll need to do for other classes. Like how to connect one thing to another
I like that this reminded me why I was passionate about my leap from the start
Awesome to have you all! Take ENTR 301 with me this spring! :)
Thank you so much!
I wish I could have high fived....
Thanks, you guys are awesome!
Grace Ann Pointe
Thank you for the presentation and to the participants for the great advice.