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LitAOH UE 19-20 - King Arthur and His Knights of the Round Table #8 - Shared screen with speaker view
Ben
01:47
Is the knight
Ben
01:58
’s tale due today
Ben
03:10
|H| She is rude :T.
nutty squirrel!!
03:59
hello
Sir $h@ne *_*
04:04
Sir Kay is also very rude to him
Sir $h@ne *_*
04:10
H:
Ben
04:14
|Q| “You are Sir Kay, the rudest and most ungentle Knight of the Court: therefore, beware of me!"
Sir Lucas The Dragon
04:19
morgana
Sir Lucas The Dragon
04:26
mercy
Ben
05:21
Accidentally pressed the shut down button instead of the delete button xD
Sir Lucas The Dragon
05:22
Gawain's brother
nutty squirrel!!
05:27
yhat woman is so rude
Ben
06:11
Linnet Sabine
Ben
07:17
:p :D
Sir Lucas The Dragon
08:29
nope!!!
Sir $h@ne *_*
08:29
maybe you don't know
Sir $h@ne *_*
08:55
She doesn't know who he really is
Ben
09:40
“Fie upon you, King Author! What an insult is this, that you send a filthy scullion out of your kitchen to save my sister, when here at your Round Table sit Sir Launcelot and Sir Gawain, Sir Gaheris and Sir Bors - the best knighted in the world - besides many others that are brave and noble also!"
Ben
09:54
AA that took me 1000000 hours
Ben
10:41
So he can prove himself
Sir Lucas The Dragon
10:44
prove himself
Ben
11:02
Without them being: Oh he is of noble blood, he should be immediately knighted!
nutty squirrel!!
11:06
yes
Sir $h@ne *_*
11:07
^
Ben
12:11
W0w
Sir Lucas The Dragon
12:13
not taran
Sir Lucas The Dragon
12:26
definatly not taran
Sir Lucas The Dragon
12:48
get lost you don't want it I don't need it
Ben
12:49
Don don dun!!! The bad memory strikes again!!!
Sir Lucas The Dragon
13:10
heels
Sir $h@ne *_*
13:15
OMG, You're Sir Gawain's brother and Arthur's cousin! You should be knighted with just that
Sir Lucas The Dragon
13:15
heals
Ben
15:00
Knight of the kitchen beat dis boi
nutty squirrel!!
15:10
sie lacelot sent you
Sir Lucas The Dragon
15:24
sir kay
Sir Lucas The Dragon
15:44
sir Kay sent you
Ben
16:29
HEY KITCHEN BOI! GET BACK TO UR DIRTY OL’ KITCHEN!!
Sir Lucas The Dragon
16:30
morgana
Sir $h@ne *_*
17:02
Who's asking siri something
Ben
17:19
Siri stirred again!
Sir $h@ne *_*
17:40
She gave the red knight his power
Ben
18:03
❤️
Sir $h@ne *_*
18:12
love
Sir Lucas The Dragon
18:15
yep
Sir $h@ne *_*
18:17
romance
Sir $h@ne *_*
18:20
marrage
nutty squirrel!!
18:27
love
Sir Lucas The Dragon
18:38
❤️
Ben
18:46
For a second I thought his name was red lol
Sir Lucas The Dragon
19:08
m
Sir Lucas The Dragon
19:13
sorry
Ben
19:19
LIESSSS!
Sir Lucas The Dragon
19:21
assident
Ben
19:37
They probably were
Ben
19:45
But they probably were doing evil while at it lol
Ben
20:03
EVILL!!
Sir $h@ne *_*
20:50
But they did say he doesn't give mercy and it is on the code
Ben
21:05
^
Ben
21:54
uH
Ben
21:58
Because
Sir $h@ne *_*
21:59
And he even disobeyed #1 on the code
Ben
22:03
She is R U D E
Sir Lucas The Dragon
22:19
kill
Sir $h@ne *_*
22:22
RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE
Ben
22:28
*Shut le gate in le face*
Ben
22:44
And also *Steals le personnel information*
Ben
22:53
*Then try to kill le him*
Sir $h@ne *_*
23:17
hE WAS PROBABLY THING TO HIMSELF "??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????"
Ben
23:30
^
Ben
23:50
‘He was filled with rage’I think it said that in the book
Sir $h@ne *_*
24:15
Forgot the !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ben
24:31
He said “It is ok, It doesn’t matter, I still ❤️ you."
Ben
25:08
My memory has not failed me…FOR ONCE!
Sir Lucas The Dragon
26:01
yes
Ben
26:02
Yes
nutty squirrel!!
26:11
yesyesyes
Ben
26:22
I think you can make a pole
Sir Lucas The Dragon
26:23
yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes
nutty squirrel!!
26:24
YES
Sir $h@ne *_*
26:33
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEs
Ben
26:34
In a different website (Automatically)
Ben
26:43
but nvm
Sir $h@ne *_*
26:54
👨‍❤️‍👨
Ben
27:43
Ironside = Red knight = ify as a knight of the round table
Sir $h@ne *_*
27:48
Bless you
Ben
27:50
Bless you
nutty squirrel!!
27:56
hate it
Ben
28:49
Sir (Miss) AVA!!!
Ben
29:05
The story of girl (feminine) POWER
Sir $h@ne *_*
29:09
The story of Girl Power??????????? What would that have to do with Arthur's timeline
Ben
29:17
^
Ben
29:31
butt
Ben
29:43
I think it is 5/9 ok
Ben
31:21
Ok
Sir $h@ne *_*
31:33
I love the name and ill read
Ben
32:16
Smith
Ben
32:37
:O
Ben
33:00
Halp I don’t lol
Ben
33:32
She beat lancelot?
Sir Lucas The Dragon
34:08
slay
Ben
35:03
Uh I like that it has feminine
Ben
35:08
Butttt
Sir Lucas The Dragon
35:10
1 of 5
Ben
35:26
It’s a little crazy 6/9
nutty squirrel!!
35:32
4/5
Sir Lucas The Dragon
35:33
even though its my story
Ben
35:43
lol
Sir $h@ne *_*
36:01
Wat
nutty squirrel!!
36:03
yes
Ben
36:06
7/9 THEN
Ben
36:11
caps
Sir Lucas The Dragon
36:15
and she has a (small) tail
Sir $h@ne *_*
36:17
I just realized something
Sir $h@ne *_*
36:38
Ladies wouldn't be called sirs
Ben
36:46
Honestly it is like some of my storied when I was younger
Ben
36:48
lol
nutty squirrel!!
37:06
what color was the dragon
nutty squirrel!!
37:10
?
nutty squirrel!!
37:14
?
Ben
37:15
Also she is a dragon
Sir Lucas The Dragon
37:26
golden
Ben
37:27
I can’t even comprehend that
Sir Lucas The Dragon
37:30
wingy
Sir $h@ne *_*
37:35
purple
Ben
37:36
She is
nutty squirrel!!
37:41
purple
Ben
37:49
She is literally a… a purple dragon?
Sir Lucas The Dragon
37:53
ava was a normal person
Rachel Miner
37:54
III. Rough Draft FeedbackFeedback as a group 
• How does the knight do in our areas of chivalry?• What’s one thing this author did really well?• What’s one thing you think might make the tale even better?
General Suggestions for Final DraftCondense the story.Separate into sections, paragraphs and dialogue.Proofread.
Ben
37:54
Wait what color is she?
Sir Lucas The Dragon
38:03
not realy
nutty squirrel!!
38:11
yes
Ben
38:14
Lucas what color was she when she was a dragon
Ben
38:15
Yes
Sir Lucas The Dragon
38:22
gold
Ben
38:37
Crazy but imaginative
Sir $h@ne *_*
38:39
also purple
Ben
38:44
Feminine
nutty squirrel!!
38:51
purple
Sir $h@ne *_*
38:57
suspenseful
Sir $h@ne *_*
39:11
and iteresting
Sir Lucas The Dragon
39:15
taken from D&D a bit about dragon parents
Ben
39:20
she’sashe
Ben
39:30
Say that five times fast
Ben
39:40
Yeah
Ben
39:51
Half dragon sort of
nutty squirrel!!
40:23
sheshashe sheshashe sheshashe HARD
Ben
40:50
Not doing mine? ok
Sir Lucas The Dragon
41:22
bye\
Ben
41:42
Uh I sent it
Ben
41:55
But I guess we ran out of tiem
Ben
42:06
ok
Ben
42:13
no
nutty squirrel!!
42:17
byebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebye
Ben
42:30
byebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebyebye