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LitAOH UE 19-20 - King Arthur and His Knights of the Round Table #12 - Shared screen with speaker view
Sir Lucas The Dragon
02:01
that was a wow
Sir $h@ne *_*
04:31
no
Eric($__$)
04:35
nooooo
Sir $h@ne *_*
04:47
I wouldn't care
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
05:08
hello
Ben
05:18
|H| Happy Veterans day!
Ben
05:25
Honour
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
05:42
he is faithful
Ben
06:10
|H| Lancelot has seen the the holy items
Ben
06:14
*three
Sir $h@ne *_*
06:43
But it's like the graeat dane already has a home that it wouldn't want to leave
Ben
06:55
yeah
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
07:15
he ran away naked!!!!
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
07:30
my highlight
Sir $h@ne *_*
07:32
^
Sir Lucas The Dragon
08:11
Galahad
Ben
08:37
Uh I said Launcelot has seen the three holy tiems
Eric($__$)
08:37
Q: does he even want it?
Sir $h@ne *_*
09:18
no
Tristan
09:49
Yeah even though the monkey lady was weird this is weirder
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
09:51
want do not want
Eric($__$)
09:51
nes yes + no = nes
Sir $h@ne *_*
09:51
he doesn't want it but he needs to get it
Sir Lucas The Dragon
10:52
is it
Sir Lucas The Dragon
10:54
?
Sir $h@ne *_*
11:22
She takes the form of guinivere
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
11:25
magic
Sir Lucas The Dragon
11:26
magic
Tristan
11:43
The magic that MAKES him go crazy
Sir $h@ne *_*
12:05
kookoo
Tristan
12:45
He was tricked
Ben
13:07
Where are they again?
Sir $h@ne *_*
13:11
Elaine really wanted his love and he didn't take it
Ben
13:12
No
Sir Lucas The Dragon
13:16
yes
Sir $h@ne *_*
13:23
do anything for a damsel
Ben
14:01
But not 2. and 4. is…well... 4. disobeys 1. in this case
Sir $h@ne *_*
14:38
Wouldn't he be marrying his aunt if he married Guinivere
Sir $h@ne *_*
15:17
KIng Arthur is his uncle
Ben
15:33
Yeah but they didn’t care back then 🤮
Sir $h@ne *_*
16:06
it did come true
Sir $h@ne *_*
16:39
but still Guinivere
Sir $h@ne *_*
17:06
But then Elaine dies
Sir $h@ne *_*
17:16
yes
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
17:28
yes
Eric($__$)
17:56
sad
Sir Lucas The Dragon
18:17
the dead elain
Sir Lucas The Dragon
18:32
heart broke
Tristan
18:48
At least Lancelot is still alive or else that might be a little bad for the round table..
Sir $h@ne *_*
19:05
It goes to Camelot and they read the note
Sir $h@ne *_*
19:48
KNIGHTS' TAAAAAAAAAAAALES
Ben
19:54
GREG YEAH
Sir Lucas The Dragon
19:56
elaine dead -> canue -> camelot
Ben
19:59
GREG?!?!? WHAT!?!??!
Ben
20:06
NEW MERLIN YES!!!!
Sir $h@ne *_*
20:08
yeeees
Tristan
20:36
Not exactly a knight
Tristan
20:46
More of a wizard
Sir $h@ne *_*
20:55
^
Rachel Miner
20:56
Feedback as a group 
• How does the knight do in our areas of chivalry?• What’s one thing this author did really well?• What’s one thing you think might make the tale even better?
General Suggestions for Final DraftCondense the story.Separate into sections, paragraphs and dialogue.Proofread.
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
21:20
and rode back on greg's ?
Sir $h@ne *_*
21:25
if no one else wants to I will
Ben
21:48
eric volunteers
Eric($__$)
22:02
fine
Ben
22:03
ye
Tristan
22:07
wait what
Sir Lucas The Dragon
22:11
ben volentires
Tristan
22:17
yep
Ben
22:19
hey!
Ben
23:06
POOF-POOF
Ben
24:39
8/9
Ben
24:44
Good!
Sir $h@ne *_*
24:49
9/10
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
24:51
what is greg's ???????????
Sir $h@ne *_*
24:55
9.5/10
Eric($__$)
24:55
9/10
Sir Lucas The Dragon
25:10
4/5'
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
25:12
9.9
Sir $h@ne *_*
25:25
follows chivalry
Ben
25:34
1 = 8/9 2 = 9/9 3 = 6/9 4 = 0/9 5 = 6/9
Sir Lucas The Dragon
25:37
no
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
25:40
no
Eric($__$)
25:42
9.9999999999999999999999999999999999999999
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
25:53
9.9/10
Ben
26:00
I think he is
Ben
26:09
Physical magic is physical force
Ben
26:24
In this universe, yes
Sir Lucas The Dragon
26:43
wizard
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
26:52
wizard
Ben
26:55
I really loved the idea of new cool powerful awesome new wizard!
Sir $h@ne *_*
27:01
They used a wizard instead of a knight
Sir $h@ne *_*
27:08
ya
Sir Lucas The Dragon
27:19
who was it?
Sir $h@ne *_*
27:23
not really
Sir Lucas The Dragon
27:34
the author
Ben
27:36
And I think he could have done something better by making an awesome show at the beginning instead f a single fireball
Tristan
27:42
me
Sir $h@ne *_*
27:42
yea
Sir $h@ne *_*
27:46
I agree
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
28:02
yes
Sir Lucas The Dragon
28:12
yea
Sir Lucas The Dragon
28:37
ben
Ben
28:42
Lucas vollunters
Sir Lucas The Dragon
28:45
tristan
Sir $h@ne *_*
28:47
lucas volunteers
Ben
28:58
Tristand and shane vollunteers
Sir $h@ne *_*
29:01
sabine volunteers
Ben
29:08
Sabine volunteers
Sir Lucas The Dragon
29:35
all except me volunteer
Ben
31:18
:o
Tristan
31:27
What?
Ben
31:46
Morgana’s son?
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
32:04
yea
Ben
32:12
HEHEH
Ben
32:16
Evil*
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
32:22
10/10
Sir Lucas The Dragon
32:28
okay...…………………....................................................................
Eric($__$)
32:48
1/1
Sir Lucas The Dragon
32:50
pass
Tristan
32:54
10/10
Sir Lucas The Dragon
32:59
0.5/0.5
Ben
33:03
1 = 7/10 2 = 8/10 3 = 0/10 4 = 0/10 5 = 9/10
Eric($__$)
33:03
paaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Ben
33:14
0.1/0.1
Ben
33:27
SAME
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
33:30
100,000/100,000
Sir $h@ne *_*
33:32
0.0000000000000000000000001/0.0000000000000000000001
Sir Lucas The Dragon
33:36
sane
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
33:53
the twist
Ben
34:05
Getrude
Sir Lucas The Dragon
34:07
0.00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001/0.00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001
Ben
34:26
yeah
Sir Lucas The Dragon
35:11
to easy to kill
Ben
35:11
Dragon was a little too easily defeated
Sir Lucas The Dragon
35:24
yes
Ben
35:35
Lucas?
Sir $h@ne *_*
35:38
more action
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
36:36
me
Sir Lucas The Dragon
36:40
all except me
Ben
36:47
Yeah sabine vollunteers
Sir Lucas The Dragon
38:37
she who?
Ben
38:52
Except the random rat that died because it was old
Sir $h@ne *_*
39:05
9.9/10
Ben
39:05
7/10
Tristan
39:09
9.9/10
Ben
39:36
DON DON DON
Ben
39:49
Plot hole
Sir $h@ne *_*
39:54
10/10 for creativity
Ben
39:54
THE GIRL DIED!?!?
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
40:07
yes
Ben
40:11
Oh plot hole
Ben
40:13
nvm
Ben
40:20
10/10 for creativity
Sir Lucas The Dragon
40:25
the horse lived happily ever after
Eric($__$)
40:27
?/10
Sir $h@ne *_*
40:36
great descriptive language
Ben
40:37
Rest in pieces little girl
Ben
41:08
It said that she had many aventures
Ben
41:32
Many fight the enchantress
Ben
41:50
And not the sharp stones that win
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
41:53
mabye
Sir $h@ne *_*
42:02
RIP enchantress
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
42:02
yes
Ben
42:15
RIP enchantress
Ben
42:21
Rest in Potatoes
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
42:25
she fight a dragon to get into the castle
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
42:42
no all add that
Ben
43:31
Shane: *Polite Applause*
Tristan
44:13
👏
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
44:13
no
Sir $h@ne *_*
44:15
SQASH THE BOARD
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
44:16
yes
Ben
44:17
YEHS
Tristan
44:21
BBBBBBBYYYYYYEEEEEEEEE
the nutty squrrirel (Sabine)
44:24
byebyebye